Hero Factory Comic #1: Crash Landing

Sorry I couldn't put captions in the pictures, but they were too small. :P I just typed out who is saying what right over the picture it applies to.

MISSION BRIEFING: ALPHA TEAM MEMBER DUNCAN BULK WAS SENT ON A SIMPLE MISSION TO WARD OFF A HOSTILE REPTOID SNAKE ON THE PLANET OF LUNAR TRATIX. ON THE WAY, HE CONTACTED SAYING HE WAS UNDER ATTACK FROM SOME HUGE CREATURE AND WAS BEING SHOVED INTO A PORTAL, THEN ALL COMMUNICATION BLACKED OUT. THAT WAS 3 DAYS AGO. THE REMAINDER OF THE ALPHA TEAM, PRESTON STORMER AND JIMI STRINGER, HAVE BEEN SENT ALONG WITH ROOKIES WILLIAM FURNO, MARK SURGE, AND NATALIE BREEZ, TO ENTER THE PORTAL AND RESCUE BULK...

At the landing site...

Stormer: "Alright, here we are. Wait, where's Surge?"
Breez: "Oh great, not again..."
Surge: "Can't... Get it... Open!"
Surge: "Got it!"
Surge: "Whew! I really need to fix that."
Surge: "OOF!!!"
Surge: "Ow."
Stormer: "Okay, here's the plan: Breez and Surge, you two climb up to the north end of that plateau back there. Furno is with me, we're going to the north end. Stringer, you check the volcano valley west of here. Remember the mission: we have to find Bulk. contact me immediately when you do."
All: "Let's go!"
Later...

Surge: "Uh, Breez, are you sure this is a good idea? it's not exactly a short fall once we get close to the top."
Breez: "You've said that three times so far. And of course it's a good idea, I came up with it! *snickers*"
Surge: "Riiiiiigghhht..."
Still later...

Surge: *pants* "Almost.. there..."
Surge: "Whoo! We.. made--"
Surge: "It? Eh, Breez?"
At Volcano Valley...

Stringer: "Heh. Friendly little place."
Stringer: "Uh-oh, I spy a friendly little, er, sumthin'."
Stringer: "Hello, there, friendly little sumthin', have you happened to see a pal o' mine by the name of Duncan Bulk?"
Stringer: "Wuh-oh, frindly little sumthin' has garlic breath!"
Stringer: "Yah! flamethrower too!"
Stringer: "Whoa!"
Stringer: "Gerrofa me!"
Stringer: "Ooooh, is he mad!!! I'm outta here!"
Back at the Southern Plateau...

Surge: "HEEEEEEEEEELP HELPHELPHELPHELPHELPPPP!!!!!
Surge: "Breez, where are you when I need yeh?!"
Breez: "Hang on!"
Surge: "Yeah, that kinda was my plan!"
Giant Robot: "GRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!"
Surge: "Breez, look out, it's gonna--!"
Breez: "UNH!"
Surge: "No way! You can't--!!!"
Surge: "GET OFF ME!!!
*THUDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*
Surge: "Surge to Stormer, we just got attacked by a huge drone. I fried it's circuits, but only after it blasted Breez with some kind of portal gun!"
Stormer: "Roger that, we got the same problem! See if you can locate Breez by her tracker. Over and out."

Furno: "Can't believe how strong this thing's armor is! How are we supposed to take it down?!"
Giant Robot: "Target Acquired."
Furno: "Whoa, hey!"
Furno: "Ha! You can't fight fire with fire!"


Giant Robot: "RRRRRGGGHH!!!!"
Stormer: "Watch out, Furno! That's a portal gun!"
Stormer: "Cool it, hot-head!"

Giant Robot: "TARGET MUST BE ELIMINATED!"
Stormer: "OOF!"
Furno: "Stormer!"
Giant Robot: "RAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Gian Robot: "YAAAAACK!!"
Stringer: "Furno! Get the pipe behind it's head!"
Stringer: "Over here, robot! Yeh great tin can! Get over here whar I ken blast you! Don't worry, we recycle!"
Furno: "Geronimoooooo!!!!!"
Stringer: "Whoop!"
Stormer: "Get away from that thing! It's gonna blow!!"

BOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!
Furno: "Wow. I wonder which was more dangerous; fighting with it or being the victor."
Stringer: "Neither. It's whoever's makin' these things."
Stormer: "We can deal with that later. We have got to find Breez and Bulk."
To be continued in part #2: Volcano Valley

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